Our Father

27/06/15

WALT: Identify the number of petitions in the our father and what they are about.

Our father who art in heaven hallowed be thy name thy kingdom come your will be done in earth as it is in heaven Give us this day our daily bread and forgive us our tresspasses as we trespass those who sin against us lead us not into temptation but deliver us from evil. Amen

28/06/15

Give us this day our daily bread-Give us our daily learning.

Forgive us our tresspasses- Forgive us for our sins.

Lead us not into temptation- Lead us away from sin.

Deliver us from evil- Help us not to do evil

29/06/15

Which is the shortest Version?

Matthew 6:9-13

Luke 11:2-4

The lords Prayer

How Is God addressed in each version?

• In every version God is addressed as father.

How many Petitions are there in every version?

• In every version there are 4 Petitions but one has 3

Which version is most like the prayer that we do today?

• The prayer that most likely  the prayer that we do today is the lord's prayer.

Name some things Jesus did to fulfill the first three petitions during his life

• The teached people the word of God.
• His saved people from sin.
• And he delivered people from evil.

What humans needs does Jesus invite people ask God for in the last our Petitions?

• Forgiveness.

Breakfast

Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos. 

Persuasive Reading Analysis:Breakfast

Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.

What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?

Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each

strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The writer says “Breakfast is a very important meal for students”
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	No	The information is very detailed and suggest that the writer has conducted some research and is knowledgeable about the importance of breakfast. There is no mention of experts - it is inferred.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or   facts to support the argument	Yes	The writer said “Not having breakfast changes your mood and the way you think.” People who don’t eat breakfast: lack energy and focus cannot concentrate Are Irritable
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	No	Talks about moods and makes the audience the effect of achievement without breakfast.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The writer says “ Having something to eat in the morning is good to have in your daily routine and it’s healthy for you and your body
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause	Yes	Makes the reader think about the possible outcomes for people who don’t eat breakfast.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;   this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations	Yes	She used facts to see more convincing about how breakfast helps us to be healthy.

Phones!!

I truly believe that children below 15 should not have phones.

Children below 15 should not have phones because they might become addicted to texting or games that will distract them from their homework or chores.  This is affect their learning and maybe their attitudes towards others. Parents will become mad because the child will have not finish their chores.

Some people think that it's okay to have a phone when you are under 15, but it's not because children might be cyber bullying, or could be cyber bullied. Others only have phones so that they can make fun of people and spread rumors.

Another reason why people under 15 should not have phones is that they could bring them to their school and get stolen. Teacher will tell the student “ why did you bring it no students are allowed to bring phones”.

So because of this I believe that children below the age of 15 should never get a phone at young age.

Homework should be banned!

WALT:Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos

Persuasive Reading Analysis:

Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.

What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?

Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each

strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	He says that “ Homework should be banned because it is too much work for children”
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	No
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or   facts to support the argument	Yes	He says that “ kids are not as fit as they should be and that homework is dreadfully unhealthy because they do school work and have to do homework.`
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	No	While the writer focuses on the children he also looks at the issue of homework from a parent's’ perspective he /she is being considerate.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	He says that “ Homework causes stress for the student and frustration for parents.”
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency   for the cause	No
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;   this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations	Yes	He said that “ Kids need to do their homework at school because at home they do have the right resources, but this is the writer's’ opinion and is not backed up with research.

The First Flyers

WALT: Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos.

Persuasive Reading Analysis:

Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.

What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?

Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing.  Read through each

strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	Orville and Wilbur Wright were the first people to invent a plane.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or   facts to support the argument	Yes	They created models so that they can look at it and gather the right pieces to make a plane.  The Wright brothers, studied the work of others and made modifications where they thought they were needed to enhance their own models.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	No
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The brothers were both engineers and therefore respected by other engineers but also met with some ridicule. Their expertise was used to help raise funds for their invention/s i.e. they fixed planes.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause	No